美国本科申请文书怎么写，有没有范文参考的相关问题，有很多打算申请留学的同学咨询，今天高途小编就收集了关于约翰霍普金斯大学的优秀文书的信息，供申请的同学参考。

申请者需要考虑大学的价值观和使命宣言——这些内容都很重视智慧培养、良好的职业道德和能够代表学校形象的人格品质。因此，学校的招生官希望能够在文书中找到以下核心内容：聪明才智，强大的沟通能力，有抱负和目标，创造性，主观能动性和自我导向性，非常渴望接受教育和进行自我完善。

约翰霍普金斯大学优秀文书范文——作者PABLO D.

Friday night, September the 16th 2022 and I am packing for my pilgrimage to Santiago de Compostela in Galicia, Spain. It is a tradition at my school that all seniors begin their final year of school by embarking on the “Camino de Santiago” (the Way of St. James). Four days of walking a total of 135 kilometers to reach our destination. We have been told to pack light, a bulky and heavy backpack will hold you back, but to be prepared for: changing weather (lightweight clothes, a jacket, rain poncho) blisters and sore feet (plenty of socks, extra shoes, bandages, antiseptics) and physical exhaustion (dried fruits and nuts, cereal bars, extra water bottles). I look at my compact backpack and I think…it is going to be a long night.

As I settle into the task at hand, carefully packing, unpacking, and readjusting items, trying to make them fit, it occurs to me that we do the very same thing in life. The backpack that we carry on our journey must also be packed light so that it is easy to carry, and it too must be equipped with everything we will need to successfully face the unexpected; to be prepared for anything that comes our way, and this got me thinking, “What do I have in my backpack?”

The first time I consciously chose an item to pack was in first grade. I remember as I listened to my teacher stressing the importance of “good behavior”, my interest was riveted on the transparent yo-yo with flashing lights which would be given to the student who received the most merits at the end of the month. I had a goal and I planned to work diligently towards achieving it, and I did. That feeling of success was so fulfilling, so gratifying that it marked a path that I would follow from there on out.

I was twelve when I made a deliberate switch of items in my backpack. I had been playing soccer forever, we all did, it is the sport of choice here in Spain, so many were surprised when I decided to take up rugby instead. My decision was based on finding a sport that not only matches my physical abilities and potential but more importantly it reflects who I am. In rugby, there are no superstars, both victory and defeat are owned by the team with an intense spirit of camaraderie. I have been playing on a federated level for the past five years and all the values that are embodied in this sport – integrity, passion, solidarity, discipline, commitment, and respect – have found a permanent home in my backpack.

There came a time when I realized that something was missing. I was unable to put a name to it, but I would reach for it in certain situations, and it was not there. My decision to do ninth grade of high school abroad, in New Jersey, led me to discover what it was. I had to learn how to put myself out there for people, outside of my circle, to get to know me. I had to open myself up to making new connections and brace myself for possible rejection by stepping out of my comfort zone. This experience marked a before and after in my life for which I will be eternally grateful.

It is 1.00 a.m. and I have finally finished packing; a tight fit, but I have everything I will need. As for my other backpack, I do a quick mental check: a goal-oriented drive, actions coherent with my character, the ability to open myself up to and learn from new and enriching experiences and other items, carefully tucked in there. Am I prepared for what lies ahead? I believe so, and the best part is, I left room for so much more.

招生官点评：

在帕布罗的文章中，为朝圣打包行李的行为成为人类在人生旅途中积累经验的方式以及我们可以从中学到的东西的隐喻。随着我们与帕布罗一起经历他们人生的不同阶段，我们深入了解了他们的性格和价值观。我们了解到帕布罗在面对挑战时意志坚定，并致力于个人成长。他们愿意接受变化和对未来道路的兴奋照亮了他们对未来的乐观和渴望。霍普金斯大学的学生总是迎接挑战，喜欢接受新的和不同的事物。通过他们的论文，帕布罗生动地描绘了一个渴望走出舒适区的人，让他们成为我们这个有远见的社区的一员。

作者个人感想：

写完这篇文章后，我对自己的优势有了更清晰的认识——个人动力、做出连贯而现实的决定的能力、不惧于扩大自己的舒适区以接受和发现自己的新事物——这些将使我成为一名有潜力的大学候选人。我选择在录取过程中突出这些优势

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